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The Bitter Kingdom, by Rae Carson

11431896Installment three of this trilogy, after The Girl of Fire and Thorns, and The Crown of Embers.

Spoilers.

What can I say? I think this is my new favorite series. There were definitely some flaws in this book, particularly with the plot, which seemed a bit random-pants in places for me. Kinda went all over the place. Other than that, though, I adored it.

Characters! I am so in love with these characters. We got to have a few chapters from Hector’s POV! Awesome! And I loved getting to know Storm even better, and meeting Red, and all the things that come full circle throughout the book. I love that Elisa ends up saving herself over and over, and gets saved a couple times, and does all this stuff with her magic – only to have her act of service be something so random and unmagical. I love that when she rescues herself, it’s because of all the physical combat she’s learned, rather than because of magic. I loved getting to see her sister again, and the way Storm fell for Alodia. I loved the way Hector and Elisa’s relationship came together.

There were some great moments in here. My favorite, the part that made me laugh out loud, was when Storm impersonates an animagus attacking a village. The quote goes:

More arrows spear the brightening sky. Storm’s voice booms across the tiny valley, menacing and curselike. He’s intoning something in the Lengua Classica. Then a giggle bubbles from my throat when I realize it’s a silly rhyme about poppy fields and drunk sheep.

It was such an unexpected bit of humor, and I couldn’t stop laughing. Awesome.

I loved the way this book ended. I loved seeing everyone’s stories wrapped up, and how it all worked out. I love that while this is a finished trilogy, there is room open for possible more stories in this world. Definitely putting this whole series on my wishlist!

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Attachments, by Rainbow Rowell

attachmentsMy second book by Rainbow Rowell was not quite as good as the first, but still quite good. Attachments is an adult book, a story about two people who work at a small newspaper in late 1999. Lincoln is the IT security officer. He had no idea, when he applied for the job, that the job description meant he would be reading employees’ email and sending out notices warning them when they break email rules. It makes him feel like a voyeur, especially when emails between Jenny and Beth start getting flagged often, and he finds himself falling in love with Beth, despite never having seen her. Now, he’s in conflict. He wants to meet Beth, but how can he? How can he explain that he’s in love with her because his job is to read over her emails?

This was an interesting book. Chapters alternate between Lincoln’s story, and the series of emails between Jenny and Beth. I found Jenny and Beth far more interesting than Lincoln, who for a good chunk of the book, seemed a bit socially awkward and dull. Then, a change comes over his character after a certain revelation about Beth. So yeah, it’s weird – I do wish there hadn’t been such a change. It’s almost as if Rowell just barely realized who she wanted him to be at that point.

The whole book feels more painstakingly written than Fangirl did. I’ve read what Rowell wrote about the differences between the two, how she used to write slowly, agonizing over every word, and then Fangirl came along for NaNoWriMo and it was so freeing to just write and write and write. The difference between the two is definitely visible when reading.

Mostly, though, it was a fun book. I wish I could have gotten to know the Chris character better. I liked him, oddly, even though I doubt I’d want to know him in real life. I’m not sure I liked anyone else much by the end, despite enjoying their stories.

As a side note, I did think it was fun to read a book with a female character named Sam right after I finished writing one!

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The Crown of Embers, by Rae Carson

10816908Sequel to The Girl of Fire and Thorns. And oh my it was wonderful. I just want to hug this series!

In this book, Elisa is struggling to assert herself as queen and not appear weak. There are assassination attempts on her life. She has to learn more about her Godstone. And of course, there was the love story with Hector. So slow, so gradual, so compelling! I need to learn to write my love stories slower. And I love that we get just a little glimpse more into the world of the Inviernos. It sounds as if the next book will have even more.

I loved every single thing about this book. The pacing. The slow unveiling of knowledge. Seeing old characters show up and learning more about them. The way Elisa has grown so much but is still herself, without ever revisiting ground from the old book. I love Rosario’s development, and the natural way that Hector’s feelings for Elisa are revealed. I love all the rituals and religion.

I remember, years back, wondering why modern-day books couldn’t involve religion without it being a conflict for the reader. In this one, religion is just a given for the narrator. It’s simply there. There’s no questioning it, but there’s never any pushing of it on the reader, either. It helps, of course, that it’s a fantasy religion. But at the same time, the book is so steeped in religion that it COULD feel intrusive. But it doesn’t.

I will definitely need to own these books!!!!!

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Phantom – DONE!

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Done. Eight years to the date, four drafts, hundreds of thousands of words in notes and manuscripts combined, and I have a final version of the very first novel I ever wrote. The manuscript still needs a six-month rest period and then a read with new eyes, followed of course by some touch-ups and edits. Mostly, however, it is done. For the first time, I am not only satisfied with a draft of this story, but pleased. More than pleased. I would give this manuscript a big long hug if I could. I’ve reread it three times in the last two days, and I can’t stop smiling.

I began Draft/Rewrite #4 on January 1st this year, and I wrote 74,000+ words in April alone (not all of them were kept!). Total word count for 2014 is about 142k, 115k of which went into this final draft. Each of the four drafts of Phantom took me four months to write, which I think makes for some awesome symmetry. Songs associated with this manuscript include:

  • “Losing My Religion” by REM
  • “I Got Shit” by Pearl Jam
  • “Ordinary Life” by Elizaveta
  • “Nearer, My God, to Thee” (hymn)
  • “Music of the Night” from the Phantom of the Opera musical

Most of this draft was written under the influence of Umbrella Brigade’s “B.D.U.” (which is NOT, however, associated with the text – only with the writing process).

The really lame, my-brain-is-melted description of Phantom: After a decade away, Sam Milam returns to her hometown when her father suffers a major heart attack. Once there, she must face estranged friends and family, memories of lost love and a devastating miscarriage, and the contempt of former fellow church members of the faith she left behind long ago. Sam finds an unexpected ally in Oliver Deboe, a family friend who helps her to understand that despite feeling as if her life got frozen in time at age twenty, she does have a chance to be happy again someday. [Women’s fiction – which is very rare for me to write.]

Some of my friends have read former drafts of Phantom, but over the years, this story has changed drastically and no longer resembles previous versions all that much. It has become so intensely personal to me that I’m not sure I will ever show the final draft to anyone. I guess we’ll see how I feel after the manuscript has a chance to rest and receives its last round of pre-beta-reader edits.

Now that I’m done binge-writing, I’m taking May off. It’s time to catch up on all the books I have bought/borrowed this year, all the movies I haven’t watched yet, all the saved blog posts I have yet to read/comment on, the submissions (for a different manuscript!) that I’ve neglected, my exercise/training regimen, the emails I haven’t responded to, and the house that desperately needs a thorough cleaning.

Also: Time to bask in the afterglow of writing the word END.

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The Girl of Fire and Thorns, by Rae Carson

Girl of Fire and Thorns, The 2Spoilers.

Once every century, God chooses a Hero. The child is meant to perform a service in His name, and is identified by a jewel known as the Godstone in the child’s navel, not present at birth, but granted shortly afterwards. Elisa is this child, given the Godstone on her naming day, and now, sixteen years old, she is to be married to the king of the neighboring country as part of a political alliance. Elisa is a scholar, but no warrior. She is very heavy and addicted to food, and while she loves her God and Godstone, she feels there might have been a mistake when it comes to her being chosen.

The plot is so much more than I described above. The book is so much more. Elisa is a fantastic character. She’s not well-versed in politics or court life, as the second daughter of a king. She detests her body but won’t make changes to it, and she’s embarrassed by the attention it causes her to receive. She has never met the man who will become her husband, and prays that he will be old, ugly, and fat, so that she doesn’t have to feel bad about her own body on his behalf. Beyond that, there is a constant threat of war against another country who seem to have harnessed the power of some sort of sorcery, something that is considered distinctly heretical in Elisa’s and her husband’s countries.

Elisa’s husband, Alejandro, is nice enough. The opening scene, at their wedding, was enough to catch my interest. He is kind, generous, and friendly. He respects her fear of intimacy and never tries to push himself on her, but also exhibits no disgust about her body. His first wife died, and he has a six-year-old son, but he doesn’t compare her to a previous life or expect her to do anything more than hopefully become his friend. Later, it’s revealed he has a mistress, but by the end, you know that he loves that mistress, and that he thinks he would have loved Elisa as well, if they’d ever been given the chance to find out. He wasn’t perfect, but he wasn’t a bad person either, and I loved that.

Elisa herself goes on a major journey throughout the book, first joining a new culture, then being kidnapped, then forming a rebel army to fight against the Invernios who are attacking the borders of her new country. She becomes stronger, losing some weight – though she doesn’t become tiny, skinny, or fit, just smaller – and learning to do things that she shied away from in the past. She makes hard decisions, and loses some people she cares about. By the time she is returned to her husband, she’s unrecognizable to him, though his son, Rosario, who only met her once, knows her immediately.

I’m doing a terrible job reviewing this book. I really, really liked it. This is set in a fantasy world with Spanish-flavor culture. Religion is a huge portion of their society, and there are all sort of rituals and manuscripts and monasteries. I learned so much more about what I needed to do for my own fantasy series from reading this book. I loved the world-building, and I think that over the next couple books, I might learn more about the Invernios, and maybe understand this war from their point of view. I hope so, at least!

Can’t wait to read the others!

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And Then She Fell, by Stephanie Laurens (audio)

cynsterHenrietta doesn’t believe in the necklace charm that has been passed down through the ladies of her family and, for years, to her. She doesn’t believe it will help her find her “hero,” but instead believes she will remain a spinster for the rest of her life. After all, she’s 29, and has become known as the “Match-breaker” in the upper social circles, because she’s the one people come to for information when they’re considering a potential match. When James, a friend of her brother, angrily confronts her for breaking off his potential match shortly after Henrietta’s younger sister, Mary, insists that she start wearing the necklace, Henrietta has no idea that fate has been set in motion for her.

Totally genre-fiction, a cross between a romance novel and a mystery novel, set in old-world London. Apparently, there are a bajillion of these novels from this author, all dealing with the same several sets of families. And I mean that – I counted several dozen of them on Goodreads, and that’s when I stopped counting. I had no idea, when I randomly grabbed this audiobook, that it was one of tons. Thankfully, while older books were referred to, this one had its own unique plot that was easily followed and wholly complete. There was a little teaser in the epilogue for the next book, but the story of this one was completely wrapped up.

So there are three parts of this book I want to discuss: the romance, the mystery, and the technical stuff. I’ll start with the technical stuff.

I was drawn into the story right away, even though I knew it was genre fiction and expected flat, dull writing. The writing wasn’t all that bad (except in one instance, which I’ll elaborate on in my next section). The plot started right away, the story was interesting, and though the POV flipflopped constantly, it felt deliberate and manageable. I never got confused whose eyes we were seeing through, even when the POV flipped every two to three sentences. The audio production was great, perfect reader for it, and the setting was believable and interesting. I was surprised at how the two story arcs were timed, because 1) I didn’t realize there were two story arcs when I started, and 2) I’m not terribly familiar with this particular genre of fiction. Maybe it’s normal. But it still took me by surprise, and that leads me into talking about the two arcs themselves.

Romance. I expected something like a historical fiction rom-com with a bit of sexiness thrown in. I did not realize that this was going to read like a Harlequin romance. I found the first couple kisses tantalizing, but they seemed to come very fast. Henrietta and James accepted their romance in the first 2 or 3 disks (of 9). Within days, they were having sex. For twenty-minute segments of the audiobook. It was…awkward, all the members and sheaths and heats. It was also a bit silly, and while believable for these characters despite the time period, very exaggerated. The first scene wasn’t too bad, until it started being referred to as “love-making” (which it most decidedly wasn’t), but the second, third, and semi-fourth were…excruciating. I was laughing through the ridiculous language throughout, and the prolonged extent of the prose. Seriously. It wasn’t quite Bad Sex Award bad, but it was rather ridiculous.

When the love story seemed to wrap up by a third of the way through the book (are Harlequin novels always that fast??), I wondered what the hell else was going to happen. Well, it turned out to be a murder mystery, with a stalker trying to kill Henrietta. The thing is, it wasn’t like most mysteries. With mysteries, there are always suspects, and someone trying to figure out who the killer is. There are twists and turns and progressions, and it keeps the reader guessing. This was nothing like that. The mystery progressed step by step without intrigue. The murderer showed up at the beginning, disappeared in one section of the middle, and by the end, was captured. There was never any mystery about his identity. The whole plot was focused on luring the guy out and catching him, whoever he was, before he got to Henrietta. In a normal mystery, there would have been red herrings – maybe Mary’s insistence that Henrietta wear the necklace, however, means the person she’s interested in will be the murderer, or perhaps one of the policemen involved, and that’s how the murderer stays one step ahead! No. Nothing like that. It wasn’t difficult to discern who he was, and I was never anxious for the safety of any characters.

So the mystery plotline wasn’t the greatest, especially as it was 90% separate from the romance part of the book. This again might just be my ignorance of the genre, however. In any case, while the book was mostly fun, especially in the first half, I have no desire to delve into more of Laurens’ world. It was good, once, as a distraction, and now I’m done.

Note: Audio production read by Matthew Brenher.

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It Starts With Food, by Dallas and Melissa Hartwig

foodAll right. I finally read the book behind Whole30. I’ve always scoffed at Whole30 before, but after having most of my gluten-related symptoms come back after 4-5 months gluten-free, I know I need to do some sort of elimination diet to figure out what else is going on. I also know I have a lot of issues with sugar and that my defenses against it have become useless, and that I struggle with fatigue, depression, insomnia, skin issues, and carb cravings. I suppose, in a way, I always knew it would come to this. At the same time, Whole30 scares me – it’s SO restrictive! But that’s the way an elimination diet goes. At least it’s not just eating rice the whole time.

In the end, I decided to check this book out because many of the smartest people I know are eating this way. Paleo-eating, while not proven yet, has become the bedrock for many athletes and body-builders and holistic practitioners. Even my regular family doctor said I was likely to do better if I ate a lot fewer carbs. I already know I have carb sensitivities, and my diet has always been more stable when I eat fewer of them. I also know that when I cut out grains and such, though, I tend to get really, really sick, and that’s the big reason I’ve stayed away. In reading this book, however, I learned that the sort of sick I get is apparently a normal reaction to cutting out grains, and that unfortunately, it’ll likely last for 1-2 weeks before it gets better, along with a host of other nasty issues.

The book itself was a bit asinine. I really don’t like when these sorts of issues are “dumbed down” for the general population. I prefer to be respected as a person. So, in terms of writing, and really, in terms of science, this isn’t the best book I’ve ever read. Most of the issues discussed were ones I’ve already learned about. But there were a few places that resonated with me:

And if that [bedtime] snack is sugar or rich in refined carbs, it pushes insulin levels up, which may lead to a blood sugar crash in the middle of the night. This affects melatonin secretion, which governs our sleep patterns, and means you could wake up at 2 a.m., unable to get back to sleep.

Yep…

Experience has shown us that most people with an imbalanced hunger mechanism fall into one of two camps: hungry all the time, or not really hungry at all.

Sounds like Jason (the not really hungry bit)…

Simply limiting added sugar (“I’m going to have one sweet treat per day”) leads to incessant battles of willpower, continued cravings, and small sugar hits, which keep your brain focused on sugar.

Yeah, don’t I know it.

There’s a lot of discussion of hormones and how they work, including a bunch about hunger levels in the morning. I remember a time when the first thing I did upon waking was have breakfast. That’s how I grew up, and that was what was natural for me. Then slowly, over my weight-loss journey, I started eating later. Then, over time, I just stopped being hungry first thing in the morning. I’m usually hungry about 2-2.5 hours after I wake up now. And apparently, that’s a hormonal imbalance. That makes sense, given that by the time you wake up, you haven’t eaten anything in roughly 10-12 hours. The fact that I’m not hungry in the morning, but AM hungry an hour or two after a big dinner is wrong. I always thought that was habit – one I acquired in college, which, coincidentally (or not), coincided with when my insomnia started – and I could break it if I tried, but maybe it’s more than that.

We’ll see. I’m reserving judgement on Whole30. Perhaps I will try it out in the near future and then reintroduce foods slowly – slower, even, than the book says to – to find out exactly what I’m reacting to. And if this makes me feel good longterm, and feels sustainable, I might just keep on it.

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Cress, by Marissa Meyer

cressCress is third in the Lunar Chronicles, after Cinder and Scarlet. To recap previous feelings, I’d wished Cinder was standalone, and left out all the moon-alien-people, which felt superfluous. Then, in Scarlet, I didn’t mind so much, because the story had fleshed out a bit more – and Scarlet put Cinder into better perspective for me. I was worried, however, that Cress was a retelling of Rapunzel, because I’ve never, ever liked retellings of Rapunzel (probably because I don’t like the original fairy tale, either). I was willing to give it a shot, however. The verdict?

I think I’m going to need to buy the books in this series.

They just keep getting better and better! I loved Cress (the character), loved Thorne, loved Cinder and Scarlet and Wolf and Kai. I loved the exploration of Africa, and the way all these plotlines entwined. I loved the humor in it, especially from Thorne. I was anxious the whole time reading it, and could not put it down. It was brilliant. Each book just keeps getting better. I can’t wait to read Winter and see how Meyer wraps this all up!

Oh: Also want to note – I’ve been reading these at intervals, without rereading before I get into the next book, or even going back to read my reviews. Meyer handles perfectly the retelling without retelling too much, just enough to jog my memory, and she also puts in little details for people who are diehard fans of the book. The scene where Wolf is cradling a can of tomatoes, for instance, which refers back to something I barely remember, but remember enough of to know this is incredibly sweet, and for diehard fans, it would be an amazing little detail. I really appreciate that.

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